scene two and three developments to final cut.

in between the rimes of 1:40 and 2:20 you can see my first rough cut of scene two. I didn't really like my first edit as i initially gave to much narrative enigma away too soon in the opening , therefore i worked and got advice from m peers to help think of ways i could have improved it . In the next video you can see my second attempt.




I prefer this edit a lot but i still felt that adjustments need to be made , i liked the way that the shots blend into each other and the use of the double exposure at the end , but i wasn't sure that the voice over worked as well as i wanted it to. I felt that to enable m to really target my audience of female and male teens that i would have to make it more modern and make the editing faster and jumpier much like modern tv and music videos use today.



This final edit i was really happy with , i changed everything that i though i could improve above and although not shown in this clip , i recorded a new voice over with i still need to add into the opening.