Second audience feedback

I asked Georgia a few question about my opening after showing her the final product. I choose Georgia as she is the the age brake of our target audience which is between the ages of 15-25 and as she is 17 she was a good person to gain feedback from. After taking her advise, i changed the editing less visible and more continuous, I did this by going back to final cute and lengthening the clips slightly differently. Making there longer or shorter depending on the shot.